Showing posts with label New Fantasy Novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label New Fantasy Novel. Show all posts

Monday, November 11, 2019

Third and Final Book of the Alban Saga




While I've been waiting on the return of of my latest SciFi/Fantasy novelMerlin & Arthur: The Awakening, from the editors, I've begun working on the third and final book of the Alban Saga. I'm not sure what the title will be yet, but I've already done quite a bit of research and just finished the first chapter.

The final book of the saga will take the reader on quite an adventure and will begin right where the second bookBlack Grotto, left off. I've included a small portion of the beginning of the first chapter below. Enjoy!


Una Murray lived in a thatch-roofed, white stucco cottage on several acres of land northwest of Stornoway on the Isle of Lewis. Her ancestors had worked the croft for generations, and her mother and father had purchased it shortly after their marriage. The cottage was small, only three rooms, but Una had modernized it with the help of one of her neighbors, Angus MacAulay. It had an indoor bathroom and an up to date kitchen, but the bedroom and living area next to the kitchen were much the same as they’d been for years.
Una never had been one to keep her home tidy. The rooms were clean but cluttered with a jumble of knickknacks and books of all kinds lying about. The main room contained wooden furniture stacked with woolen blankets and shawls, a small table and chair for eating and working on various projects, and a cooking area with a days worth of dishes stacked in the sink. She had electricity, but she’d always preferred candles and the light from her fire to keep her company in the evening.
Outside her home, Una had a small garden, some chickens, a few sheep, and two goats that wandered her property. The land was bounded by ancient dry stone walls, and she had lived all of her eighty-two years there. She was a part of the history and fiber of Stornoway and was well known to everyone as a loaner whose only communal ties lay with her closest neighbors and a few select members of the Druid and Wiccan community.
On this early November eve, Una had completed her chores for the day and was sitting down to a meal of tattie scones, hotch potch stew, and tea. The simmering bowl of lamb and vegetables was hearty enough to warm her insides while the peat fire in the fireplace calmed and soothed her shivers without. The weather had finally turned from sunny and clear to the usual damp and cold autumn drizzle that she knew would be with her for months.
As Una lifted the last spoonful of liquid to her lips and swallowed what was left of her scones, she added her dirty dishes to the others in the sink and wiped the table clean. Pulling her chair closer to the fire, she placed another brick of peat on the flames, and gathered her worn and tattered woolen blanket around her shoulders. Then she sat down and scooted up closer to the burning embers and placed her tired and achy feet on an old wooden stool. Clasping her blanket close, she stared into the flickering red, blue, and yellow flames that arose from the dense, black logs of peat and breathed out a deep sigh.
It wasn’t long before her eyelids felt heavy, and she could feel herself needing to go to bed. But, as was her usual custom, she fought off sleep for the moment and reached for her favourite single malt and snifter. She poured a wee dram into the glass to sleep by and breathed it in. It smelled of Scotland - peaty, rich, and earthy. Cupping the glass between her palms, she took her time with it until the last sip lay upon her palate and melted down her throat.
Another long sigh accompanied the completion of her nightly ritual. Then she laid the glass to one side and was about to get up to go to the bathroom when she was shaken out of her reverie. There was a loud pounding on her door. Una seldom had company, and hardly ever after dark. The pounding came again, weaker this time, but just as insistent. Then again, silence.
Keeping the blanket around her, she came to her feet, grabbed the iron poker that lay against the stones of the fireplace, and walked warily towards the four-paned window near the door. She glanced outside but couldn’t see anyone. She didn’t want to open the door, but she knew there was no getting round it.
Grasping the handle with one hand and holding the poker above her head with the other, she opened it just a crack. Peering out, she couldn’t see anyone until she glanced down. In front of her was a person bent over and kneeling on the ground. They were wearing a thick, brown woolen robe that was rain-soaked and hanging heavy over their frame. They had sandals on that were caked in mud, and their head was bowed and shielded by the hood of their robe. In the absence of a sash, the person’s left hand was clutching the front of the robe to keep it closed, and in their right was a long, wooden staff with a blood red jewel at one end.
Una instantly recognized the staff as that of a Druid priestess. It gave her pause, but then she opened the door a bit more and abruptly asked, “Who are ye? Why are ye at my door at this time o’ the night?”
 The person glanced up, and Una could now see that it was a woman. Her long red hair was wet and matted against her forehead and face; her lips were blue and quivering. She spoke unsteadily and asked, “Can I come in? I’m soaked through, and…I’m weak and freezing…please!”
Sensing her desperation, Una laid the poker to one side, helped the woman to her feet, and said, “Come with me.” As soon as she touched her, it was clear that the woman had been speaking the truth. She was trembling uncontrollably underneath the wet robe and was so weak and frail that Una had to use all of her strength just to help her get up and walk over to the chair by the fire.
Once there, Una said, “Here, give me yer staff, and I’ll help ye out of yer sandals and robe before ye catch yer death!” In response, the woman only nodded. Una laid the staff to one side and knelt down in front of her. She took her sandals off and wiped the mud from her feet. She laid the leather sandals by the fire and removed the wet, heavy garment, which took some doing. Then Una wrapped her own blanket around the woman’s upper body.
There was some stew left on the stove so Una put it in a bowl and poured a healthy dram of whisky into a second snifter. She had to help the woman eat and drink because her hands were shaking uncontrollably. Then Una poured another dram for her and got some scones for her to eat. The woman’s trembling had eased just enough at that point that she could manage on her own, so Una put another brick of peat on the fire and placed an additional blanket around the woman’s legs. She studied her for a time and then asked, “So lass, do ye have a name?”
“Aye.”
Her answer made Una chuckle. She said, “Well, what is it then? I cannae just call ye, woman.”
That brought a slight smile to the woman’s lips. She sipped once more on the whisky, swallowed, and replied, “My name’s…Obsidian…Obsidian Ualas.”
“Ualas…ye don’t hear that name very often. I reckon it’s old Gaelic, eh?”
“’Tis.” Then Obsidian had a question of her own. “Can…can I ask you something?”
“Aye.”
“This’ll sound strange, but what year is it?”
Una tilted her head, confused by the request. “Ye want t’ know what year ‘tis?”
Obsidian merely answered, “Aye, I’m a bit muddled right now.”
It was clear that she’d been through a lot, so Una merely answered her question. “Well, ‘tis two thousand twenty six, lass. Ye dinnae know that?”
    With the answer, Obisidian’s eyes widened and carried a flash of anger. The look quickly vanished and was replaced by one of complete despair. Then tears started to gather and glisten in the corners of her eyes. She glanced away, hoping that the old woman hadn’t noticed and whispered to herself, “So it’s true…”  


Friday, September 4, 2015

CAVE OF DREAMS: Character Profiles

Cave of Dreams 


CHARACTER PROFILES

I'm writing a new fantasy novel titled Cave of Dreams. In sequence, it comes after Beatrice, but it is being written so that you can read it without having read the first book. They have many of the same characters with some new ones added in Cave of Dreams.

It seems the more I write, the more I attempt to give each of my characters their own very unique personality and characteristics. In order to accomplish that in a more organized fashion, I've recently taken to listing each of their attributes before I begin writing about them in the novel. I can remember them better that way, and I can also make sure that each of them is truly an individual. It's a technique that I'm finding quite helpful, as I seem to refer back to each character's profile often and even add to it as I write.

To give you an example, I'm going to show you one of the profiles that I created for a new character in Cave of Dreams. I've taken the list of attributes for him directly from my working notes for the book and listed them below. The list does not contain all of his characteristics because some of them would tell you too much about the novel. There are enough, though, for you to get a sense of what I'm doing.

One other technique that I found useful in developing this particular character was that I did an image search on the internet for a person that would fit his general description. And in so doing, he actually ended up being a compilation of my imagination as well as several of the pictures that I viewed during the search.

In relation to his name, it is completely fictitious, derived from a Scottish name search that I did.

Dr. Willam Hamilton Brodie or Wellyn (his Druid name)
  • Professor of Celtic and Scottish Studies at Edinburgh University
  • Avocation is as a Druid healer mostly during the summer months
    • In that capacity, his name is Wellyn
  • 59 years old
  • 5' 10"
  • White shoulder length hair parted in the middle of his head
  • Ruddy, outdoors complexion
  • Gray eyes
  • Summer clothes
    • T-shirt and blue jeans
    • Leather loafers
  • Dress as Druid healer
    • Brown, hooded ankle-length robe
  • Tattoos on arms and one shoulder
    • Druid runes
  • Fit but slight paunch - likes Scottish ale
    • Strong arms like his ancestor, Erin
  • Serious student of
    • Celtic and Druid history
    • Sacred Druid sites in Scotland
    • Druid healing techniques and customs
  • Knows of the Baumans and the new Center on their estate
  • Direct descendant of famous Druid Prophet, Erin
  • Drives a white and brown 2-door Cooper

Monday, August 10, 2015

Expanding My Writing

Cave of Dreams 


Cave of Dreams is my latest novel. It's my fifth and probably my most ambitious project to date. As I've written, studied, and read other authors, I've become more and more aware of the importance of details. Having a rich story that feels life-like and real to the reader beg the necessity and importance of them. There are scenes to be painted, character's to be enriched and enlivened, and the tremendous importance that details play in the plot as well. There are times, though, when you need to watch out for the pitfalls that one can encounter with details from either slathering the page with too many of them or trying to place them into a story at the wrong moment.

In Cave of Dreams, the number of characters has increased over my other novels as have the fine details that tick the story along - moment to moment. And, I'm painting my characters with richer and finer tones and qualities. All of this detail also teaches me patience and sometimes creates a need for more research to make sure that the work feels authentic and has some basis in fact, even if it is a fantasy, as this book is.

I've been working on Cave of Dreams since the beginning of June, and I'm only into the sixth chapter. So far, though, my chapters are longer, and I'm building the world of this story a lot more slowly and carefully than ever before. In those six chapters, I've almost written 25,000 words, and chapter six isn't even complete yet. I'm not a word counter, normally, but it is an indicator of what I know is happening in my writing.

I mentioned patience, and I know that I'm gaining that as an author. I'm really enjoying the slower pace. I've always loved writing descriptions anyway, and taking more time to lay out the scenes has become very enjoyable for me.

I also mentioned the possible pitfalls of too much detail. I'm watching for that and using places where I believe other authors have stepped over that cliff as my measuring tape. Sometimes simpler is better, so I'm doing my best to balance conciseness with rich texture. "Balance in all things..." has always been one of my mottos, and I think it definitely applies to writing as well.

I'm enjoying and learning and working hard on Cave of Dreams. The book should be done in five to six months. I'll be excited as always when I finish and look back on its development and the wonder of creating something from my mind. It's a ride that I relish and revel in!


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Sunday, August 2, 2015

New Fantasy Novel CAVE OF DREAMS: Chapter 4 Quote


CAVE OF DREAMS



Below, I've included a quote from the first paragraph of chapter 4 of my new fantasy novel, CAVE OF DREAMS. I've been working on it now for about a month. It's going slowly, but I'm having a great time writing it, and I wanted to share this with you.

His sight, as he dreamed and stumbled through a world beyond knowing, was like a patterned collage of images, moments, and times from the past, present and future. Most in color and as real as the creases in his own hand, but some in black and white, flat and two-dimensional like white cave drawings swirling about on black walls. Each picture held meaning and foresight, but only if he could truly see and understand them; only if he could sort them, classify and arrange them in a way that would bring insight and coalesce into prophecy.”