Showing posts with label Climax. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Climax. Show all posts

Friday, July 26, 2024

Book III Of The Alban Saga: The Vortex - WORKING ON THE CLIMAX

  

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0

The Alban Saga series takes place in Scotland in the real world with fantasy incorporated within it. It also includes elements of mystery, time travel, Scottish history, and actual locales and famous sites within Scotland.


Book I of the series is Beatrice. Book II is Black Grotto, and The Vortex is the third and final book of the series.


I just finished Chapter 27, titled "FIRE & EVIL," so I should only have three or four chapters left to write. That means that I'm very close to the end and am definitely into the climax at this point, which is always great fun!


I don't usually like to include an excerpt from a chapter this close to the end of a book, but in this case, I think I can. So, below is a snippet from the beginning of Chapter 27!


As fall began to sweep across the Isle of Lewis, altering the circadian rhythms of every living thing, the temperatures dropped and the days became shorter. Summer's end always seemed to carry with it a bit of sadness, though autumn, in its own right, was still a magnificent time of year. It almost felt good to add an extra layer of clothing, cozy up to a peat fire in the evening with an elegant dram of whisky, and, because the nights were now longer and darker, it was also possible for the residents of Stornoway to view astronomical events unavailable to them during the long days of summer. The northern lights could sometimes be seen when the horizon was devoid of cloud or rain, coating the black canvas of the northern sky with vibrant brushstrokes of green, red, orange, pink, or yellow.


Furthermore, fall was typically a time when the locals had more time to relax and do things for themselves and with their families without having to deal with as many tourists. However, this autumn had not allowed them that luxury. It had been marked by the rise, once again, of the Stornoway Grove of Druids, led by their new High Priestess, Una Murray, and nothing had been the same in their small town since her arrival. And now, in a little over two weeks, it seemed that another event was to occur that, if the rumours were to be believed, could alter their lives even further. In fact, it was said that it was of such great import that, if it actually did come to fruition, its impact could be significant enough to alter not only how people lived in Stornoway but all across the globe. It was referred to as the Ascension Ceremony, and not a great deal was known about it outside the close-knit Druid community. The only thing that the locals knew for certain was that it was said to involve some type of transformation of the High Priestess and that it would occur very early in the morning on 18 September when the Harvest Moon began its journey across the sky.


With all the preparations and the arrival of throngs of people via planes and ferries, life for the High Priestess and her grove of acolytes continued at a frenetic pace, but it did not just affect them. The whole town had been inundated with more people than it could handle – even more than during the busiest of tourist seasons. In point of fact, the town’s population, which normally was about seven thousand, was currently over eight and continued to increase almost daily. Businesses were so swamped that they could hardly keep up, and the establishments that usually housed tourists had quickly run out of room. The town’s residents had to take up the slack and open their own homes to the newcomers.


Una Murray’s grove of acolytes had also become significantly larger. Their numbers had swelled from twenty or so to over two hundred, particularly as word had spread concerning the magical abilities of the High Priestess, the trainings that she’d been providing for her acolytes, and because of all the stories that were swirling about concerning her Ascension Ceremony.


All of which should have left Una Murray feeling extremely positive and confident, especially with so little time left before the ceremony. However, Obsidian, who was Una’s closest confidante, had noticed that the closer her leader was to the actual day, the more worried she'd seemed to be. Logically, Obsidian believed that the reason for this had to be that Una was merely having a very normal response to what would have been, for anyone, an astonishing, life-changing experience. After all, during the time Obsidian had known her High Priestess, she had never seen her behave in such a manner and had never known her to over-think or worry about anything, really. However, despite all the logic that Obsidian could muster to the contrary, she still was unable to shake the feeling that there had to be something else going on.


Sunday, May 12, 2019

MERLIN & ARTHUR: The Awakening -- Almost finished!




I'm finally working on the last chapter of my new SciFi/Fantasy novel, Merlin & Arthur: The Awakening. Once chapter 30 is done, I'll write the epilogue, and then the book will go into editing. I can't believe I'm this close to finishing the first draft! It's been quite a journey!

Writing the climax of the book has been an incredible experience, not only because of the book's complexity but also because of how hard I've labored to keep the tension building to the very end. It's been a challenge, but I'm extremely pleased with how it's coming together.

I'm looking forward to sharing Merlin & Arthur: The Awakening with you! It will still be awhile before it's published but keep checking my blog for updates. When it's done and when it's published, you'll be the first to know!

Thursday, April 11, 2019

Update: My New Sci-Fi/Fantasy Novel




In my new Sci-Fi/Fantasy novel, Merlin & Arthur: The Awakening, I'm currently working on chapter 26. I've written over 123,000 words so far and just recently entered the build up to the climax.  It will take place over several chapters, and there will be an epilogue at the end to tie it all together.

I'll be leaving for Scotland again, probably in September, so I'm hoping to complete the book within a couple of months or so.

This particular novel has not been an easy one to write. I started it on October 16, 2016, and have been working on it since. Three months before that, I did a great deal of research to prepare, and it didn't stop there. In every chapter since, I've had to continue to do additional research. In fact, the other day it took two hours to complete one paragraph due to the need to look up information.

The story has elements of the Merlin and Arthur legend in it that I wanted to carry on within the plot, but most of it is told slightly in the future. It takes place in various locations around the world and has an important strand of international intrigue built in as well. Throughout the plot there's a large cast of characters, several government agencies from different countries, and aspects of fantasy and science fiction woven throughout.

As you can imagine, it's been an incredible amount of work, but I've loved every minute of it and have approached this book somewhat differently than my others. From the start, I set out to have each chapter be mini-story of sorts, yet still write it in such a way as to encourage the reader to wonder about what would happen next. I also incorporated a similar writing philosophy within each sentence and paragraph, attempting to end them with the most important word or phrase - not burying the lead, so to speak.

One last tidbit that I wanted to share with you was that I've been struggling mightily with the climax and ending of the book. However, two days ago I was working on chapter 26, and it all started coming together. I was relieved and extremely excited! I take a great deal of pride in how my books end, and I didn't want to let myself, the characters, or you down with this one. I don't think you'll be disappointed.

I'm looking forward to sharing Merlin & Arthur: The Awakening with you!

Keep checking my blog for updates. When it's done, you'll be the first to know!

Thursday, April 14, 2016

BLACK GROTTO: Chapter 30 Is Done

BLACK GROTTO 


Update: Chapter 30 Is Done


I edited the climax today, and the first draft of BLACK GROTTO is almost finished. I'm really proud of the ending. I believe that it's complex, surprising, and very powerful. I worked very hard on it. Now, tomorrow, I'll begin the final chapter, which will be the Epilogue. It will be one of the shortest chapters in the book, but very important!