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Showing posts with label Publishing. Show all posts

Saturday, September 20, 2025

VORTEX: Edit & Review Complete / Publishing Coming / Two Short Excerpts Included!

 

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0
 
In my last update for Vortex: Book III of the Alban Saga, I mentioned that I wouldn’t do another update until the book was published. I decided to do one more short one!

All the editing, proofing, re-reading, and reviewing of the book is complete as of today. The exact publishing date on Amazon isn’t set yet, but it should be out by the end of September. There will be another update when that happens!

What a lot of work and a lot of fun! 

Below, I wanted to share with you two paragraphs from Vortex that I thoroughly enjoyed writing! I had to chop a little to avoid spoilers, but here they are!


… dawn broke behind a thick layer of fog that had buried the land beneath it for most of the night. Bea, too, had been buried; she was stretched out under a thick, warm comforter, sleeping soundly—unmoving and dreamless—as the minute hand on her bedside clock ticked through its circular arc. The sun, peeking over the horizon, had not yet attained the proper angle to enter her bedroom window and nudge her awake. It had brightened and warmed the air enough, however, to fully dissipate the remaining fog outside, as well as the bothersome midges, which were much better suited to cool and dark than to sunlight. Beneath that same window, the earth and rocks of the meadows and forests on Bea’s family estate had also started soaking up the sun’s rays, releasing puffs of vaporous steam into the air and adding their own type of beauty to the morning. Bea, however, remained oblivious to it all.

 

 

As the deep of night further enfolded the multitudes that gathered round the Stones, the temperature continued to drop, issuing forth countless billows of steam that rose among them as they breathed. Nervously awaiting the start of the grand ceremony, everyone either gazed upwards into the velvety-black sky, bespeckled with countless pinpricks of blinking light, or cast their eyes towards the round, full face of the dazzling Harvest Supermoon. But no matter where their attention lay, all of them had a sense of the critical, earth-changing events that were about to unfold. They knew that whatever happened, it would deeply affect their perception of reality going forward and cause their emotions to vacillate in a constant, chaotic cycle between anticipation, foreboding, uncertainty, and wonder.


You can look at the other two books in the series, Beatrice and Black Grotto, or any of my other books, by clicking on the Bob’s Books link at the top of my blog.

Wednesday, July 30, 2025

VORTEX: Book III of the Alban Saga - Last Update Before Publication!

 

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0
 
I just wanted to give you an update on what’s happening with the third and final book of the Alban SagaVORTEX! 

The third edit was completed today, and the final read-through of the manuscript has begun!


The next time you hear from me, you will be notified that the book is ready for publication on Amazon and the date of its release! 📚 

In the meantime, you can look at the other two books in the series, Beatrice and Black Grotto, or any of my books, by clicking on the Bob’s Books link at the top of my blog.

Wednesday, July 2, 2025

VORTEX: Book III of the Alban Saga - Edit Update!

 

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0
 
I just wanted to give you another update on my new book. Right now, I’m working through the third and final edit of VORTEX, the last book of the Alban Saga trilogy!

It’s going really well! In fact, the edits are helping improve the story by enabling the multiple plot lines and characters to weave an even more intricate and visual tapestry than before. 

It’s also been wonderful to keep track of how all three books in the series are becoming such a fun tale, overall, about the Bauman’s, their friends, and about Bea! I love the characters in this book!

It’s just damned exciting to see it come together like this!

I’m hopeful that the editing process will be completed sometime in July so that VORTEX can be published on Amazon either by the end of July or early August!

I’ll check in again soon! 📚 

In the meantime, you can look at the other two books in the series, Beatrice and Black Grotto, or any of my books, by clicking on the Bob’s Books link at the top of my blog.

Tuesday, June 17, 2025

Book III of the Alban Saga: VORTEX - Final Edit

 

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0

 

The editing process for the final book of the Alban Saga trilogy, VORTEX, is going well! The second edit is now complete, and the third edit will begin today. It shouldn’t take as long as the other two! 


This third edit should be the final part of the editing process, and I hope to have VORTEX published on Amazon by the end of June or early July.

Just wanted to keep you updated! 📚 

Friday, May 2, 2025

Another Edit Update: Book III of the Alban Saga: VORTEX

 

"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0

 

The editing process for the third and final book of the Alban Saga trilogy, VORTEX, is going well! The first edit is complete, and the second edit is progressing well, with five chapters out of thirty-four finished so far! 

In the second edit, there’s still basic editing happening, but less of it. Also, the plot, relative to the different characters and plot lines, continues to be monitored. That’s the most complex task going on right now. So, the spreadsheet that was created during the first edit to keep track of all the dates, characters, and time travel has been really helpful!

The book will probably go through a total of three edits before that process is completely done, and I hope to have VORTEX published by the end of May.

Just wanted to keep you updated! 📚 

Sunday, March 23, 2025

VORTEX: Editing Is Moving Along!


"Vortex bw" by ahisgett is licensed under CC by 2.0


The editing process is going well. The third and final book of the Alban Saga trilogy, VORTEX, is about 1/3 of the way done on the first read-through!!! 

Not only is it going through basic editing, but with all the times jumps happening relative to the different characters and plot lines, checking those is a fairly complex task. So, a spreadsheet is being maintained to make sure that all the jumps mesh and coincide correctly!

Hope to have VORTEX published sometime in April.

Just wanted to keep you updated! 📚 


Friday, February 27, 2015

THE CHOSEN: First Cover Sketches & Two Chapter Quotes


THE CHOSEN


I've almost completed the fourth and final draft of my new adult science fiction novel, The Chosen, and Greg Opalinski has started sending me the first sketches of the cover. I'm really pleased. As usual, Greg is doing a wonderful job. It will be fun to see the cover develop as the process moves along.

On October 21, 2014, I gave a preview of the first paragraph of each the first five chapters of The Chosen. If you'd like to read that entry, Click Here. In this entry, I'm going to give you the first two paragraphs of Chapter 23, which I've provided below. There are 26 chapters in the book.

You can also read a complete excerpt of the first two chapters by clicking on the the Bob's Books' tab above.


THE CHOSEN: First Two Paragraphs of Chapter 23

    "Bodo’s living space was warm with the lights dimly lit but comfortable. The early morning sun on M-78 had just touched the horizon, setting off a golden glow in the distance and casting the soft light of morning onto the lifeglobe surrounding The City.
   Bodo had been the first to open his eyes and sit up on one elbow. He blinked away the sleepiness, yawned, slowly inched his body out from under his soft blanket, and gazed at his three compatriots. Each of them was still asleep, curled up and breathing quietly. He thought about how vitally important today was, yet there was a part of him that didn’t want to alter this calm, serene moment – a part of him that wanted to go back to sleep."


Friday, February 20, 2015

THE CHOSEN: Third Draft Completed & Work On The Book Cover Has Begun



I competed the third draft of my new adult science fiction novel, The Chosen, today. It looks like it won't be published until early in March because I need to edit it one more time.

Also, Greg Opalinski still has some work to do on the cover; it will be different than what you see above, and I'll be excited to see it when he's finished. I know Greg will do a wonderful job, as usual!

I'm very, very happy with the novel, and I feel it's my best work to date. It will be published, as my other works have, on Amazon.com and on other Amazon sites around the globe.

It's also the longest book that I've written. Rooms was about 82,000 words, and The Chosen will be almost 88,000.

I've also updated the excerpt of the first two chapters from the book. You can take a look by clicking on the Bob's Books' tab at the top of this blog page or by clicking on the link below.

The Chosen Excerpt: Chapter's 1-2



Friday, January 23, 2015

THE CHOSEN: Second Draft Completed & Excerpt from Chapter's 1-2




I competed the second draft of my new adult science fiction novel, The Chosen, today. It won't be published until later in February or early March because I need to edit it one more time. Also, Greg Opalinski still has some work to do on the cover; it will be different than what you see above.

I'm extremely pleased with this novel and am very excited to bring it to you. It will be published, as my other works have, on Amazon.com as well as other Amazon sites around the globe.

I've also put a new link on the Bob's Books page for The Chosen. It's an excerpt of the first two chapters from the book. You can take a look by clicking on the Bob's Books' tab at the top of this blog page or by clicking on the link below.

The Chosen Excerpt: Chapter's 1-2

Friday, January 16, 2015

BEATRICE & ROOMS Version 2 & Editing and Reviewing THE CHOSEN for Publishing in February


ROOMS & BEATRICE: Version 2 Revisions

 

I've just created version 2 of Rooms and Beatrice. For Rooms, only the first chapter was revised. In Beatrice, the changes were more extensive. Also, the changes to Beatrice were to get it ready to enter the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest, which is in February. There hasn't been a notice yet for the 2015 contest on Amazon's Createspace website, but it should be there soon. I'll let you know how that progresses as it gets closer. Last year, Rooms made it to the second round. We'll see how Beatrice fairs. 


THE CHOSEN











The first draft of The Chosen is finished. Now I can get back to work on doing all the editing so that I can publish it sometime in February. I'm very excited about this book and looking forward to completing it.

Once The Chosen is published, I will look for some other contests to enter and go back to work seeing if I can interest an agent in my work. Last time I worked on that, I received some good reviews from some of the agents, but still haven't found one that will take me as their client. I'll keep looking, and I'm going to look for some publishing companies and agents in Europe as well as America.


Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Looking For An Agent

Before I discuss my search for an agent, I just want to remind you that if you haven't yet, please check out my three books on the right side of this blog and the links below each. You can also see and purchase them on Amazon by clicking on the cover of each of the books.

AGENT SEARCH

First of all, before I submitted anything to an agent, I did quite a bit of research on how to write a query letter. I referenced several sources for this. One of the websites that I used was this one

Then in order to find agents that deal with the types of books that I write, I've been using the Association of Authors' Representatives, INC. to locate them, and before I send them anything, I read their submission guidelines carefully. I know from all the reading that I've done that it's important to follow those, as they are often a little different for each agent. Also, it seems that most agents now prefer that you send them your materials in the body of an email.

The last two days I've sent out probably thirty emails to agents. I'll continue this for a few more days, and then I plan to get back to work on my writing.

I am very new to this, so it will be interesting to see what types of responses that I get. I know that it's going to be a learning process.

If you have any suggestions or websites that you've used, or if you have an agent that you know of that looks at science fiction or fantasy, please let me know.

Wednesday, July 30, 2014

New Book: Second Draft Completed

New Book: "Beatrice" - Second Draft is Complete


(Forest)

The second draft of my new book, Beatrice, is finished. This draft went from 72,000 to 76,000 words, and there are now twenty-eight chapters. As I thought, the book got bigger with each edit. That seems to be a trend.

Ever since I started this book, the ending was something that bothered me. I just wasn't sure what I would do to end it. The rest of the book had been very intricate and each chapter seemed to almost write itself, but not the ending.


I finished, but wasn't satisfied. The final chapter just didn't work. It obviously was bothering me because one night I dreamed a different ending, and that was it. I got up that night and wrote down the idea. The next morning, I was finally excited about how I would end it, and then I spent time adding and changing to make it right. I'm very pleased now. I'm going to publish the book within a couple of weeks, and then I'm going to stop writing for a while. I'm a bit burned out.

I've planned a sequel to Rooms and now Beatrice has a sequel as well. That wasn't planned from the beginning, but now I know it has to happen.

After I get Beatrice published, I'm going to concentrate only on my agent/publisher search and writing in my blog, and as I mentioned in my last post, I'm pretty sure that I'm going to enter Beatrice in this year's Amazon Breakout Novel Contest. I'm looking forward  to it.

When Beatrice is finally finished and published on Amazon, I'll let you know. I'm really looking forward to it. I think my writing is improving every day, and it will be fun to see how it does.

Also, if you haven't yet, please don't forget to check out Rooms and Wheatgrass: An Irish Fantasy on Amazon.

Tree/Moon Image from:
Forest Blue Moonlight Wallpapers.. Digital image. Travelization. N.p., 30 June 2012, Web. 16 Mar. 2014. <www.travelization.net>.

Friday, July 11, 2014

REVIEWS of ROOMS & Some thoughts on ROOMS and WHEATGRASS: AN IRISH FANTASY


Cover Illustration and Design by Greg Opalinski


Below are some of the first reviews that have come in from Amazon and Goodreads for my science fiction novel, Rooms, since it was published about two weeks ago.

*****
I started Rooms one evening and found the story line engaging and the characters interesting. The next day I picked it up again planning to read for a bit. A third of the way in I couldn't stop--reading all day until finished. The characters became more and more real. The diversity and fullness of the plot held me.

Stegner touches on many issues--environmental, political, social, moral & spiritual. In the process he has also created just a darn good story. It engaged me in ways I did not expect and left me wanting a sequel!


*****
The story line/plot found in this novel grabs you from the very beginning and holds your attention to the point you cannot put it down. It has twists and turns that will take a reader by surprise. The book highlights many important social and cultural concerns that really need to be addressed today as our world moves forward through time to an uncertain future. This novel is destined to become a movie - Order it now --- you are in for a very interesting ride through time and space.

*****
Beautiful, deep story that captures your imagination. As you read the book, more and more elements of the plot come into play. The unique feature of the book is that it is not only a story written to entertain a reader but is also a deep, wise and touching story that will make you think about the world that we live in, what it is and what should be really important in our lives.

*****
What a great ride and adventure! You see people give books reviews all the time where they say they couldn't put the book down, well don't start reading unless you want to stay up all night with this one. Excellent writing style, you really get to know and care about the characters. It also really makes you think about what if. Love it!!

To find the book on Amazon, you can click the links below.


Paperback on Amazon
Kindle eBook on Amazon



A Thought About RoomsBeing outside in the open, under the sun, beneath the stars - being Free!

As I wrote Rooms, I thought a great deal about the world we now live on and how people of all ages yearn for and even crave open, natural places. You see people walking in parks or along rural, city and mountain trails, families having picnics by a river or even a small pond, and others simply lying outside on the grass on a bright, sunny day watching the world pass by. It’s incredibly basic to our nature.

In my book, it is one of the themes that is woven into the plot. I thought of the human race migrating to different rocks throughout the galaxy, ingeniously figuring out ways to live and survive and all the time actually searching for another earth-like planet. How would it be to live beyond the earth, always within something? How would it affect us? How would we cope? And what would happen to us if our planet’s environment was so polluted and damaged that simply being outside could kill us?

In the first chapter, the main character, Rad, finds himself thinking back to a time when he took a chance and exposed himself to the elements, even though he was living on a lunar planet with no oxygen, little warmth and hardly any water. His primeval need took over. He had to do it. Below is an excerpt from chapter one, where he is thinking back and remembering how it felt.

“He had been living on a settlement where he’d received his first assignment after leaving the lifeglobe where his parents had raised him. It was a lunar planet with no atmosphere. Rad had walked outside the lifeglobe one night in his survival suit and had dared to shut off the system and open the optical face of his headgear for less than a minute. He remembered it very clearly and could still feel the rush of air from his suit and see the unobstructed view of the horizon and stars in the distance. The experience had been extremely frightening and yet magnificent at the same time. The cold had been severe, threatening to freeze his skin. His lungs had ached from the need to inhale, and his eyes had clouded rapidly with exposure to the elements. He’d become light-headed and dizzy in seconds; his head had pounded and ached from the rapid change in pressure. But even with all of this, the experience had made him feel extraordinarily alive. It had been a rush, more exhilarating than anything he had ever known. He’d only been exposed to the elements for a few seconds before closing the face of his helmet and re-pressurizing his suit, but being out in the open, unblocked and free, had been something that he would never forget. Everywhere he had ever been, there had always been the necessity to look through something, always needing to be protected from the ‘out there.’ Everyone was always protected from the ‘out there.’” 



A Thought about Wheatgrass: An Irish Fantasy: The background behind the book.

I wanted to briefly give some background behind the writing of Wheatgrass: An Irish Fantasy. I knew someone once who was in an abusive relationship, one that they felt they simply couldn't leave. It broke my heart, so I wrote this story.

    

Wednesday, July 9, 2014

FIRST REVIEWS ARE IN FOR ROOMS & Progress On New Book


Cover Illustration and Design by Greg Opalinski

Rooms has been published on Amazon in both Kindle and paperback form for a little over a week now. It's selling in both formats and the ratings and reviews have started coming in on both GoodReads and on Amazon. Here are three of them.

*****
I started Rooms one evening and found the story line engaging and the characters interesting. The next day I picked it up again planning to read for a bit. A third of the way in I couldn't stop--reading all day until finished. The characters became more and more real. The diversity and fullness of the plot held me.

Stegner touches on many issues--environmental, political, social, moral & spiritual. In the process he has also created just a darn good story. It engaged me in ways I did not expect and left me wanting a sequel!


*****
The story line/plot found in this novel grabs you from the very beginning and holds your attention to the point you cannot put it down. It has twists and turns that will take a reader by surprise. The book highlights many important social and cultural concerns that really need to be addressed today as our world moves forward through time to an uncertain future. This novel is destined to become a movie - Order it now --- you are in for a very interesting ride through time and space.

*****
Beautiful, deep story that captures your imagination. As you read the book, more and more elements of the plot come into play. The unique feature of the book is that it is not only a story written to entertain a reader but is also a deep, wise and touching story that will make you think about the world that we live in, what it is and what should be really important in our lives.

To find the book on Amazon, you can click the links below.


Paperback on Amazon
Kindle eBook on Amazon



New Book

I've completed 23 chapters of Beatrice and am well into chapter 24. It's looking more and more like there will need to be at least 26 chapters to finish the book as the climax is more complex and lengthy than I had first planned.

The going is very slow right now. I'm writing and rewriting continually doing my best to create the images and emotions that I want. It's fascinating but also difficult.

I find myself very caught up in the scenes as they unfold, and I'm experiencing the emotions and feelings of the characters as they encounter them. It's a very intense section of the book.

I should be done with the first draft in about a week.

Sunday, June 29, 2014

ROOMS Published & My New Book BEATRICE & Thoughts on Self-Publishing


Cover Illustration and Design by Greg Opalinski

It's exciting to have Rooms published on Amazon in both the Kindle and paperback versions. It's selling, now I have to wait for the first reviews to begin to come in. I know it will take a while, as people need time for the book to arrive and time to read it. Honestly, though, it's not easy waiting, but I'll summon the patience!

To find it on Amazon, you can click the links below.


Paperback on Amazon
Kindle eBook on Amazon



New Book

I think I have about three chapters of Beatrice left to write. I'm writing the climax now, which will take about two chapters to complete. It's a challenge to do justice to this part of the book, but it's also a lot of fun. So many plot elements are coming together at this point; it's like weaving a tapestry and finally seeing the threads and patterns take form and shape.

Self-Publishing

Today I read an article in Forbes Magazine about self-publishing, and I like what it says. I'm not an expert by any means, but I think it makes sense.

I've thought for a long time that promotion is important but that getting reviews from people and publishing more than one quality work would do the most to help build interest in my writing. I've focused on writing more than promotion since I've started, and that's what this article is about - write, write, write... Take a look and see what you think.

Wednesday, June 11, 2014

Rooms Book Cover & Publishing Update / New Book / Next Book / Poem: "60 Years"

ROOMS Book Cover


Well, here is the cover of Rooms! If you click on the image of the cover above, you can see a larger version of it. 

Greg Opalinski did an outstanding job and truly captured the feeling of Rooms for the reader. He was wonderful to work with and is obviously a real talent. The book will be sold on Amazon in both the U. S. and many other parts of the world. You will be able to purchase it in both paperback and the Kindle eBook version. I'll let you know as soon as it's available. It may be a week or so yet, but it will be out soon!



New Book: "Beatrice"


(Forest)

My new book, Beatrice, is now over 51,000 words, and I just completed chapter 20. Each chapter now gets more and more fun to write as I near the end of the book. It looks like the final chapter will be chapter 23 or 24.

For anyone new to reading my blog, Beatrice is a very different book from Rooms. It's a Fantasy/Mystery/Thriller with lots of twists and turns and questions that will make you wonder as you move deeper into the plot. It's interesting because even though the general direction of the story can be seen early on, those questions will keep you wondering until their finally answered.

I have a lot of rewriting and editing ahead, but I am enjoying seeing the story come together. This book is really fun to write!

Next Book: Sequel to Rooms
I've begun planning my next novel. I've known for a while that I'd like to work on a sequel to Rooms, and I have a plan  started and will begin work on it when I've finished Beatrice. It will be a while, but I thought I'd let you know. I even think I have the title for it, but I won't let that out for a while.

Poem
As I near the publishing of my first adult novel, my mind goes to my mom and dad. They have traveled on to brighter lights and a place of harmony and balance that goes beyond earthly understanding, but I still feel them most days and hear them as they talk to me and help me along my path. I know they're proud of what I've accomplished, so I wanted to share a poem that I wrote for them on their 60th wedding anniversary.

60 Years



Seasons play our lives
Like a fine ballad
Weaving melody and harmony
Between laughter and thought

The first note came forth
Played in glorious celebration
As a birthday begun
With song and love

Motherhood
Protects, provides, nourishes
Fatherhood
Protects, provides, nourishes

I, a note in life’s pop-ballad
Mother, coaxing the song from my lungs
Father, showing me honesty, laughter, and work
Family, singing of home

60 years of laughter, worry, and music
60 years together
60 years as one
60 years bringing each other love

My Mom
My Dad
No one knows me better
No one loves me more

Mom and Dad

I love you!

Copyright © Bob Stegner 2006


Tree/Moon Image from: 
Forest Blue Moonlight Wallpapers.. Digital image. Travelization. N.p., 30 June 2012, Web. 16 Mar. 2014. <www.travelization.net>.


Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Novel Update & Poem: "The Lake"

ROOMS
by Bob Stegner

(Trish Steele)

Wow! I just received the latest update of the cover of Rooms from Greg OpalinskiIt's really going to be good! He is a real talent, and the cover will create an image for the reader that will also set the right mood for reading the book. I'm excited!


New Book: "Beatrice"


(Forest)

My new book, Beatrice, is now about 42,000 words long. I don't think it will be as long as Rooms, but it should be between 60,000 and 70,000 words. I'm into the heart of the plot now where more and more is being divulged as it moves towards the climax. It is a blast to write it!

Poem
I like this poem. I wrote it after walking around Green Lake in Seattle, Washington on a brilliant day of sun and color. It made me think of Monet's works.



(Monet)



The Lake

A malleable portrait of dots and scraps of color
On a canvas shifting the world from focus
Step back
Those same brush strokes become lucid
We see
A tree, a running creek, a bridge
A world recognizable, yet nonetheless new
Monet dared us to see

The painter of impression’s journey
From mind to canvas to eye
Giving form,
As the canvas took shape
Around lives, beliefs and memories
Monet taught us to look

Even so,
We recognized these things
From the beginning
As a child turning its head
Staring in that strange way,
Until a slight smile revealed
Awareness

And as we go through time
The earth brings us wonders
Pushing us beyond plain sight
We gaze at sunsets, storms and evenings of light
Mornings of bright, brisk awakenings
We focus
And reach deep
To catch a glimpse
Of it all
Monet remembers

One day, I saw a lake
It embraced me in vegetative abundance
And shades of color beyond knowing
It lay surrounded by mounds of earth and trees
Wild fowl traveled its surface
And set upon it as dots on a dream of light
People gathered
Paid homage
And dared not leave its magnificent shore
For fear of losing
The moment

The vision
Was as if we could perceive
Monet’s painting
Of a perfect Lake
We stepped back and viewed its splendor
Becoming part of it
The people, the plants, the animals, the ground, the sky,
The liquid shimmering ripples of radiance

I sat on a bench, mesmerized
Partially closing my eyes
And caught sight of
The light from the evening
Sparkling and changing shape
Transforming perception

The jewel in my eye
Taught me
How to live
How to love
How to see beauty

Monet smiled

Copyright © Bob Stegner 2006

Image of Door:
Trish Steel [CC-BY-SA-2.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Tree/Moon Image from:
Forest Blue Moonlight Wallpapers.. Digital image. Travelization. N.p., 30 June 2012, Web. 16 Mar. 2014. <www.travelization.net>.
"Water Lilies and Japanese Bridge" by Claude Monet - In U. S. works published before 1923 are in the public domain